the TOMB RAIDER storyfix


hello cinnamon bun,

tomb raider (2013) was formative for me, but i have some SERIOUS problems with the story. since a new movie came out in 2018, i decided to test my mettle and try fixing it! 

join me as i build a plot embryo for how I WISH Lara’s story had turned out.if you’ve always wanted to see a plot embryo IN ACTION this is a window into my process.

grab a cuppa and get comfy

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and here’s the completed plot embryo…

tomb raider plot embryo

*note: this old design of the plot embryo printable is no longer available

want to learn this plotting method?


all storyfix episodes