the TRANSFORMERS storyfix
hello cinnamon bun,
the transformers movies are notoriously bad. the first one had potential though, didn’t it?
in this video, you can see the whole process, from A to Z, as i come up with a whole new plot for transformers (2007) and attempt to fix the glaring plot problems and lack of substance which made this movie so frustrating.
if you’ve always wanted to see a plot embryo IN ACTION this is a window into my process.
once you’ve finished the video, you can check out my completed plot embryo below.
let’s go, cinnamon bun
Ever wondered what it would have been like if the first Transformers movie had been... good? Come along for the ride as I give fixing it a crack.
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and here’s the completed plot embryo…
*note: this old design of the plot embryo printable is no longer available