the TRANSFORMERS storyfix
hello cinnamon bun,
the transformers movies are notoriously bad. the first one had potential though, didn’t it?
in this video, you can see the whole process, from A to Z, as i come up with a whole new plot for transformers (2007) and attempt to fix the glaring plot problems and lack of substance which made this movie so frustrating.
if you’ve always wanted to see a plot embryo IN ACTION this is a window into my process.
once you’ve finished the video, you can check out my completed plot embryo below.
let’s go, cinnamon bun
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and here’s the completed plot embryo…
*note: this old design of the plot embryo printable is no longer available