Storyfixing Transformers (2009)

The Transformers movies are notoriously bad. The first one had potential though, didn’t it?

In this video, you can see the whole process, from A to Z, as I come up with a whole new plot for Transformers (2007) and attempt to fix the glaring plot problems and lack of substance which made this movie so frustrating.

If you’ve always wanted to see a Plot Embryo IN ACTION this is a window into my process.

At a half hour long, it’s a chunky video, so feel free to grab a cuppa joe and get comfy!

Once you’ve finished the video, you can check out my completed plot embryo below.

The Completed Plot Embryo