The Transformers movies are notoriously bad. The first one had potential though, didn’t it?

In this video, you can see the whole process, from A to Z, as I come up with a whole new plot for Transformers (2007) and attempt to fix the glaring plot problems and lack of substance which made this movie so frustrating.

If you’ve always wanted to see a Plot Embryo IN ACTION this is a window into my process.

At a half hour long, it’s a chunky video, so feel free to grab a cuppa joe and get comfy!

Once you’ve finished the video, you can check out my completed plot embryo below.


story magic academy plot embryo

ready to learn how to do it yourself?


 

The Completed Plot Embryo

how I'd fix Transformers finished plot embryo

 

 Want to learn the plotting method I use in this video?